Description: For the last few weeks we have had writing. Poutama does writing every Tuesday, Thursday and Friday. I am in Elly's group and we have been looking at sentences. the sentences we have been looking at are simple sentences, compound sentences, complex sentences and adverbial phrases.
Feedback: I think you did really well with your sentences and adverbial phrases. Jayden P
Feedfoward: Next time you could add more into your slide. Jayden P
Evaluation: Thanks for the feedback/feedfowardI think that I could manage my time better with the slide
Well done Kyan. Remember that you need some commas so that your complex sentences make sense for people reading them! Go back to Slide 12 to see some examples for you to learn from.
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