Sunday 8 March 2015

Story telling

Purpose: create a story to share orally
Description: Oral storytelling is a Maori tradition. We have been planning our own story to tell on the Marae in Week 7.









Evaluation:I don't like my story because it was way to long and I could make it a bit more fun and exiting 

2 comments:

  1. Kyan, I really liked how you varied the tone and pitch of your voice. You seemed to know your story well and presented it dynamically, but I got a little lost towards the end. Next time make your story short and snappy so your audience is engaged for the duration of the story.

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