Wednesday 18 September 2013

garden writing

Date:19,092013
Task: write a story to tell someone about our garden.
WALT: describe
SC:
what reminds us off
what it looks like, feels like, tastes like, smells like, sounds like
show not tell
use words that help build a picture




my garden writing


On Friday  we lined up to shut our eyes and we walked a bit in a ,at the end we ended up in a misterious green land with redish and  brown  when I surprised and amazed! th3re like a tall sky scraper for bushes was a green big bush! and the tree as high as a disco ba11





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