Art Portfolio Post

Description: Every Wedesday afternoon poutama does art. Elly's class does olympic art and Troy's class and Nic's class do self portraits with the background as stuff that represents our life so far. I am in Nic's class so I did the self portrait. Here is my self portrait and slide.

Feedback: I like how you used blending for effect. Tane

FeedFoward: Next time you could outline your head better. Tane

ET Reo Portfolio Post

Description: Every monday afternoon some people go to kapa haka and some people stay in poutama and In ET Reo we have been learning about whakatauki. Whakatauki is a proverb a proverb is like a quote but is a well known saying we have had two whakatauki the to whakatauki are He aha Te mea nui o te ao, he tangata he tangata he tangata and nau Te raurau, naku Te raurau Ka ora ai te iwi. i will show you the picture of the first whakatauki here they are

Feedback:I like your art because it looks detailed and it looks like you .
Feedfoward:I think you could cut better because some parts need cutting off.

Evaluation: I think next time I could work on filling in all of the gaps

Writing Portfolio Sample

Description: For the last few weeks we have had writing. Poutama does writing every Tuesday, Thursday and Friday. I am in Elly's group and we have been looking at sentences. the sentences we have been looking at are simple sentences, compound sentences, complex sentences and adverbial phrases.

Feedback: I think you did really well with your sentences and adverbial phrases. Jayden P
Feedfoward: Next time you could add more into your slide. Jayden P

Evaluation: Thanks for the feedback/feedfowardI think that I could manage my time better with the slide